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Well guys this is not the actual part or the climax of the story which I have drafted, but somehow I felt like putting up this other thought of mine infront of you so that I can get your comments on this possibility…..I shall post the actual ending soon…I wish to see what each of you would respond to this.
I have started this story thinking that I will make this a happy ending. I thought I would justify the prologue and keep it a question mark between him, her and time and finally patching them up and quoting the ever used phrase “And they lived happily ever after.”
But something tingled me to post this …. So here I am..
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Sarathi was waiting for Ruchi on a bench, trying to calm himself though he is tensed. Ruchi came elegantly towards Sarathi and started to speak trying to hit right on the point.
“Sarathi I know that you love me so much and have been waiting for my reply for a long time. I like you and I feel happy for having such a nice friend as you. Now listen carefully, I have got a call from my parents and they want me to get married to a guy who is working in
Sarathy was shocked and couldn’t understand what to do and how to talk….
“Ruchi, I ask you only one question…Do you love me? May be your parents want you to get married to some guy that’s fine but all I want to know is your heart. So please let me know…Do you love me?”
“It doesn’t make any sense Sarathi, when I say I am gonna get engaged next month, what makes u ask me if I love you?”
“No, it does matter to me Ruchi, all I want to know is whether the woman I love loves me or not. I may tolerate any pains but the pain of not knowing my lady’s heart wouldn’t let me stand, so please…..please tell me whether you love me”
“Sarathi all I can say is I love my parents and shall follow their wish as much as I can”
“That’s not what I asked for Ruchi…please I am not going to do any silly deeds but …please answer my question”
“Sarathi you are really troubling me”
“Ruchi please …”
“I don’t love you ok? I really don’t love you, now you got the answer so leave me alone……”
Saying this she left the place crying to her room.
“Sarathi felt the ground breaking under his feet, he felt so lonely at that very moment. He sat there at the park in total despair when his phone rang”
“Hi Sarathi its me Abhi, I don’t know what Ruchi have spoke to you but all I want to let you know is that Ruchi loves you, as much as you do. I know Ruchi, she herself told me a million times that she loves you and now for any reasons I can’t see her killing her heart like this. Sarathi you are a great guy and you would keep this gal happy, so what I feel is approach her parents about this saying that you love her.”
“What!! What did you say Abhi? Ruchi loves me? ohh you have no idea what you did by letting me know this. Thank you so much my dear friend”
Sarathi’s world started rejuvenating with hope. He immediately called Ruchi and told her, tried convincing her that he would talk with her parents. Ruchi said ok.With that he called up her parents and spoke about the issue. They obviously didn’t expect this so were dumbstruck and immediately outraged with all this. They told him to be away from her and that they have confirmed the match for her and no more talks on this issue is allowed. Sarathi tried all possible ways to convince them but none worked.
Ruchi had to go to
Ruchi wasn’t ready to go and marry Sarathi without her parent’s permission and neither did Sarathi wanted this.
Ruchi got married. She left to
Few days after Ruchi’s marriage, Sarathi’s parents married Sarathi with a gal and sent the newly wedded to
Unlike many lovers who failed to marry, these lovers didn’t try killing themselves. Instead they started sharing their lives with someone else and lead their own lives with hope.
Years passed by Ruchi got out of her despair and hoped to find love from his husband’s heart and she did. On the other hand Sarathi, became a responsible husband.
Its New year’s eve and it was party time!!! There were celebrations all around, people greeting each other wishing a very happy and joyous new year. Ruchi and her husband; Sarathi and his wife met there in that party. There was a moment of silence between Ruchi and Sarathi, their eyes greeted each other and saw each other’s better halves and thought “I was supposed to be there, beside my love.” But it was only for a moment, a smile sprung up on each faces and they happily introduced each other to their life partners. Neither of them forgot each other and neither of them have regrets. They individually worked on to make their lives happy and to find their love in their life partners. If they have married each other, they must have been happier from the very moment they got married. Now though they have missed each other terribly at the initial stages, their new love soothed their hearts and made them feel happy for being theirs. And now they are happier and will be happy forever.
This is reality guys, not all love stories end saying that ‘they lived together happily ever after’. And if you expect that all love stories should end in marrying each other, if not ending their lives under the name of love.., then I am sorry my dear friend, you got to be realistic and practical. Human life is so precious. No matter what happens one should never try ending up their lives. To live with hope brings the joy and reason for living. Love is not life, it is merely a part of life. Dying for one person’s love and shattering all the dreams of your parents, abandoning your loved ones is meaningless. Its just matter of minutes my friends…just minutes. If you realize that there are people who care for you and that they love you, you certainly wouldn’t die for that so called valentine of yours. People often question “what is life without love?” I agree, there is no life without love, but all I want them to answer is “What is love without life?” When you are not alive and are not giving Love another chance to enter into your life then how do you justify your love? What tribute are you really trying to pay for Love by piling up corpses in the name of eternal divine love? Hope …. Hope is what drives our lives, when you ask others to give you a second chance in many issues, why don’t you let your own life have another chance of finding love? …. and who knows may be you deserve better and may be you will find an ever lasting love for your life…..
Just have faith in Love and hope in life.
7 comments:
hmmmm.............
kabhi alvidha na kehana :) la undi andi !miru chepina kada lo present situation ..kani akkada ending veru ga undi .
NIjam ga evari love ayina antha strong ayyunte pelliki munde proper decision teesukovali.
kani pellayaka love situation osthe hmm kastame !kani one should always try to be (sincere/commited to )with their married partners
Okasari okalaki commit ayyaka vallani epudu ey reason valla kuda hurt cheyakudadu ! just mana past lo love ivala mundukochhindani inni days manatho life panchukonna vallaki anyayam cheyyatam nyayam kaadu .
Leave past behind and move on
*****yes! its v.apt ending******.
LOVE life kakudani ekkada analedu. love can be ur life and why not but ,love ante marriage or s** tho ne end authundi ante adi stupid ,
Mana manasulo kalige sweet feeling ne LOVE antaru adi above all worldly things ..so let that feeling be alive but do not commit mistakes with those feeelings:). Think and act like matured person so that people around u and ppl living with u feel good :)
Apt ending ey andi so far ..!
Hi
KANK movie...?
Well i haven't seen it though... :D
Thanks for ur comments :)
please read my upcoming blogs also
shall post them very soon :)
oye enti aa endingggggggg...... naaku baadhesindhi.....
ok ilaanti similar endings naaku thelusanuko kaani......... hmmmm!
parvaaledhule baagaane undhiiiii...... saripettukuntaaa!
Hmmm...i guess its realistic and practical, but cant really say i like the ending, i always wish that they will try a little harder to make things work out and that they will live together happily ever after,
but whatever happened to them or what happens to people, is sad but there is always " hope" .
the part where u say "let your own life have another chance of finding love" is the one thing which makes it all worth while and all the pain and sorrow to go away. its the best part for me satti...
thanx for the "hope" and a whole lot more.
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